Wow Fantastic. This is truly a great piece of work. I love your style and commitment to making this as good as it is. My only complaint is that you started telling a really nice story but ended it too soon. I would love to see this continued.
I liked it
I liked it. It seems like you had a lot of filler and could have made it a bit shorter. I liked your animation and thought you had a very unique and fun style. keep trying and you'll improve. Also I just submited my first entry to NG, its called "Be Happy" you should check it out.
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